Tuesday, June 3, 2014

AHW


There once was a girl named Jade. She lived in a big house in San Francisco with a beautiful view of the Golden Gate Bridge. She always dreamed of going to Paris. In her free time she loved to pick all sorts of flowers, dance and Ice skate. She had a little sister that was 2 and her name was Gabbie. Her parents were divorced and lived with her mom. She so had and older sister but she never saw her. She really loved flowers and everything to do with Paris. She wished people could see how smart she really was. She was in the 6th grade and went to a good school. She went to tutoring two days a week and her dad took her. Her mom was always tired when she got off of work and fell asleep really quick. Jades little sister loved to ride her purple bike and sing bubble guppies. Every time the show would come on she would stand in front of the tv, look around then sing. Jade would join in with her. In dance there was once girl in Jades class that always got to be first or infront. She was nice but she always new how to talk to people. One day Jade was riding her bike from the store with gabbie in the back when she saw a house. She picked up gabbie as she snored on her shoulder. Creeeeeeek the door seemed like it was saying. When jade put one for on the floor a piece fell down a deep deep dark hole. She safely got to the other side. There was a grand stair case  right infront of her and it had a note on the 4th step. Carefully Jade walked up the steps but when she got to the 3rd step someone tapped her shoulder like they were in a hurry. She turned around quick almost falling over the steps. She relized that it was only her sister asking where they were. Gabbie jumped down and picked up the note. When she did an old woman appeared behind them. She was holding a flower and had on an Eiffel tower dress. She picked up Gabbie which made Jades heart beat faster than a cheetah. Jade closed her eyes as she slowly hit the ground. When Jade woke up she was in a tiny room and it smelled like blood. She went to the mirror and in blood it said the final clue is around the corner. Jade checked her her pocket to see if her pocket knife was there. “ good I have it” she said. When she opend the door a note on the ground said this is the end. Jade walked back into the room carelessly but the 4 ninjas dropped down infront of her. There faces looked familiar. She watched the ninjas.They started to fade away. Suddenly she heard crying. It was her sister. Jade rushed out to the hall and scooped up Gabbie. She was still crying but after awhile she fell asleep. When Gabbie woke up, Jade was gone sp she decided to look for her. As Gabbies foot hit the 4th step a big whole appeared and inside the whol was lava with evil people in it. Gabbie felt someone pushing her to her death. Or so she thought....... To be continued 

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