The surprise

    It was a bright and early morning in Chicago. I was at my cousins house eating breackfast before my mom and I went on a tour of Chicago.We hopped in the car and started down the road. It was very bumpy I thought. Our cousins had saved a parking spot for us in their penthouse. We got out of the car and pulled out a map. The streets were busy and the smell of cupcakes filled the air. It was the CUPCAKE STATION!! The Cupcake Station is a favorite of my mom and mine." Mom can I get a party time cupcakeYes"my mom said but before she could finish I was already inside. Mmmm I said as I took a big bite out of the cupcake.

 This reminded me of the time my mom and I were walking in downtown Birmingham, and I had a taste for something sweet, "mom can we go in yes"I decided to try the party time cupcake. It was sooo good.

Out of nowhere my mom was sweating like crazy. "Come on Jordyn "my mom said pulling me fowarard. I was wondering why she was rushing? Something was up and I was going to find out. We were running down all the streets making a fool of our selfs. What's going on? I said to myself. I saw in my moms eyes that she wanted to tell me but she didn't. Ahead of me I could see a brick building with a red banner that kind of looked like it said AMERICAN GIRL. As we walked closer my mom walked faster and I got nervous. It was AMERICAN GIRL! I was suddenly filled with happiness. Ring ring ring my moms  phone rang. Hello yes where there said my mom. I thought she was talking to my dad but it was really someone else I thought. I walked into the door and suddenly I heard screaming. But it was just the other girls exited to be there.

Wow I thought, this is going to be the best day ever! The whole point in going to the AMERICAN GIRL STORE was to get a doll but I knew my mom wouldn't do that. We went up the escalator and then I kind of saw someone that looked like my best friend Lia. It was her! Ahhh I screamed in excitement. I ran over to her and gave her the biggest hug. "How did you get here?" I asked. We'll your mom and my mom said they can't tell us. Ok I'm just glad you can be here with me. We sat down at a table to eat with our dolls t

I worked on my performance piece and wrote some of my story